Entry 20 December 17 2009
Sports
I like sport they are fun, trieing and hard work. They best part of playing baksetball this year so far we won all of your game but lost all of your Jv games. I hate haveing practices. I get to play some of the varsity games but not a lot. I like play with the varsity players sometimes they get under my skin. My brother is a good basketball player I get to play against and with him.
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Entry 21 December 22 2009
Christmas Break
These is what Im going to do on my break. Frist thing I am going to do is watch television. On Chirstmas I am going to open presents and hang out with my grandpa. On new years I am going to eat pizza and watch television. If all the snow is gone I will play basketball with my brother so I can get better. If there is good packing snow I will have a snowball fight with my friends.
trieing=tiring
ReplyDelete* I agree, practices can be very tiring, but I don't think it would be a good practice if it wasn't.
That's great that you are able to look up to your brother. I would imagine that both of you would be pretty good players.
These should be 'this'. These= These little kids were annoying. This= This is my favorite part of the day.
It sounds like your break is going to be nice and relaxing. I hope everything turns out okay! :)
*You are missing entry 18, everything else looks good. Thanks for posting your entries.
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